Mangled Poetry – Rhyming No Matter What

Sun, Nov 9, 2008

Poetry

Mangled Poetry comes so naturally, and this week I want to revisit the “Rhyme” poem, where the meaning takes second seat to authors desire to make sure it rhymes.  This weeks rhyme scheme is a,a, b,b, c, c,

I title this poem: 

Plain White Tee

The mood is formal
The feeling is normal
I wear a shirt that has no theme
I hope that it’s not a dream
If a shirt like this gets it wet
Those who see will not forget

 

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4 Comments For This Post

  1. omama Says:

    MONDAYS
    Mondays come each 7 days.
    They are always covered in haze.
    Words in my mind,
    ‘Here comes the daily grind.
    I am so tired, the boss so grouchy,
    It’s time I laid down on the couchy.

    I crack myself up. roflol

  2. Green Girl Says:

    The children are all off at school
    My coffee is not yet cool
    My toes feel quite cold
    That bread might have mold
    I should go to the store
    But I’d rather blog more.

    Okay, I’m so lame.

  3. Carolyn Says:

    Men’s wet t-shirt contest?
    Now I cannot rest
    Those awesome pecs
    Make me a wreck
    When they move up and down
    My gaze there is found.

    Is it getting hot in here? :)

  4. Claudious Says:

    These poems are increadible, it’s hard to pick a favorite they’re all done so well, but the way to my heart is most definitely through my ego, and Carolyn has done a good job of making me want to show off that wet tee shirt pic I decided not to post.

    Thank you so much for your poems!

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